First bits of Feedback to improve on

unedited soundscape


When starting my sound scape I showed my first draft to get some feedback on how to improve and better my work to make it more realistic for a listener. The improvements I got told was that each sound was a little harsh to the ears and that i should tone down and work on the reverb for a better finish. Also I was that my Elvis music i used in the background was to load and the main attention of the sound scape, which was not allowed because it was not my own work However, i was given the idea to use the music as a sort of motion and movement in my soundscape by changing the volume from place to place. The music was also changed through effect and ep by making it sound more like it was thought an old radio create a more realistic sound.